Parts XVIX and XX
Some notes on Parts XVIX and XX:
- These two parts represent my attempt at slowing down the pacing of the story by using less panels per page. It works to a certain extent.
- Part XVIX shows my attempt at playing with panel placement by using an insert panel. I like it but think the panel sort of gets lost in the details of the larger panel. (The rough versions of these two parts were in full color and the panel insert reads much better in color.)
- There is something vaguely dirty about the way Robot is hugging Edward in Part XX. It was not intentional.
- Part XX is the last time I reenforce the fact that Robot only wants a hug and is not, outwardly dangerous.